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I'm glad you liked it. It was one of those things that just ... I don't know ... fell out of my pen. I clearly had no direction with it at all. Good to know it stands up with it's own, crippled legs.

Also, I've worked some on Asylum, though it's not finished. I've taken a lot of your suggestions into account. Do I start a new thread, or edit the old one, or put it under the old one? How do you want edits done?]]> http://www.elfquest.com/social/forum/thread/7692/short-story-metamorphose-feedback/view_548958/ Fri, 04 May 2012 03:05:16 +0000 Squirrel http://www.elfquest.com/social/forum/thread/674/what-film-did-you-see-yesterday/view_548570/
Wow, what a weird trip. I'm still processing this one. David Lynch's stories often go through involution after involution. This one had so many inward turns that I was mentally silenced by it. It was a Zen-like moment of pure quiet upstairs. I'll have to watch it again. ]]> http://www.elfquest.com/social/forum/thread/674/what-film-did-you-see-yesterday/view_548570/ Mon, 23 Apr 2012 18:47:21 +0000 Squirrel http://www.elfquest.com/social/forum/thread/7693/feedback-pocket-of-air-poem/
1. Does it make sense to you? Can you prove it by telling me what it's about (briefly)? I know my poems can be cryptic, but I'd like to make this one clear enough to understand.

2. Critique the language, the flow, anything. What are its strengths? Weaknesses? Why?

I'd also like to explain that my first drafts do not have a lot of line breaks. If you are uncomfortable with the block of text, lemme know.

Thanks.]]> http://www.elfquest.com/social/forum/thread/7693/feedback-pocket-of-air-poem/ Mon, 23 Apr 2012 18:16:29 +0000 Squirrel http://www.elfquest.com/social/forum/thread/2636/what-have-you-discovered-today/view_548548/
and that she's married to Neil Gaiman.

Interesting day.]]> http://www.elfquest.com/social/forum/thread/2636/what-have-you-discovered-today/view_548548/ Mon, 23 Apr 2012 17:05:48 +0000 Squirrel