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Messed up.. (A poem)

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Why..
Is everyone around me letting me down..
im faaling apart..
right in front of them..
yet..
you chose to leave me..

Im all alone now..
and im messed up..
I know what I whan't..
I know what could help me..
But I..
can't handle it..
cause everything inside me..
is turned upside down..

Im not burning annymore..
nor am I bleeding..
then what am I?
and why..
am I still crying?

Do they even care?
why can't they see?
I need someone to hold on to..
why?
why won't they help me..

Im giving you one last cry for help..
Beryl
Thanks.. im glad you like it

I wrote it last night when i felt sad.. tryed to.. express some of the feelings I haveb been feeling lately..

And thanks for caring and even throuth it seems like only the people who is involved can help me.. then yeah.. I think I do need help..
Embala
Quote: ... and even throuth it seems like only the people who is involved can help me.. then yeah.. I think I do need help.I understand well that often only those who are involved can help ... too well, maybe.

But when you are still feeling like you expressed - then talk to someone, please. A frie...
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Beryl
Yeah.. its just hard when those people decied they won't help..

I got a good friend who I have been talking alot with about it.. and he isin't involved... I have told some other of my friends about it as well..
so don't worry I won't go under without a sound..

and thanks *hug*
Embala
I'm really relieved to hear this Beryl! Hope this issue can be settled and you'll come out of the "emotional hole" soon. *hug*
Beryl
Im glad you feel relived..
Yeah I hope so too.. I have been wondering if some time away from everything would help.. I just can't get away right now while seeking work..

*hug* thanks again.. I think I will try to find a happy poem to post in my blog
WolfMoonSky
I hope thing will get better for you Beryl. If I didn't read the comments I would be very worried by now I hope you will be fine

This is an emotional and sad poem, but it is beautifull!!
Beryl
Well.. I don't really think things can get worser my now.. I think it has to get better before it get worser annyway

But thanks im glad you aren't too worried
thanks for caring

And thanks im glad you like the poem..
writing poems is my passion..
jasonia
I love your poem! But dont like that your so sad Beryl. As always keep in mind that Im here if you ever wanna talk. Also that there is alway a light somewhere at to end of the tunnel. So stay strong! and remember that you are never alone! We/I are/am always here for you!
Beryl
Im glad you like it
And thanks alot
Yeah I know you guys are verry caring
makes me feel loved again
Adamant
that is a wonderful poem because that is how people sometimes feel including this part

Quote:
Do they even care?
why can't they see?
I need someone to hold on to..
why?
why won't they help me..
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