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It reminds me of the style in Clockwork Orange. Gritty to the extreme, filled with things about mental stuff, but the most jarring thing is that there is a charming streak. You gain an insight in interesting characters, where in this case you want to know more about them.
I really like what you've named the monster. Mary is such a feminine name here in the western world, but not only is Mary a he, but different from other monsters. Or so you describe him.
It has a nice flow.
What I like best though is the scene where he understands that Jeordie is gonna take the storyteller now, cutting to how you describe the open artery.
And last but not least... Ilove quote endings. Others call it cheesey but I love it.m :D
I really like what you've named the monster. Mary is such a feminine name here in the western world, but not only is Mary a he, but different from other monsters. Or so you describe him.
It has a nice flow.
What I like best though is the scene where he understands that Jeordie is gonna take the storyteller now, cutting to how you describe the open artery.
And last but not least... Ilove quote endings. Others call it cheesey but I love it.m :D
Banner is a collab of sorts between Embala and me. The quote belongs to Scooter.
Thanks to Embala for the avatar and the banners. You're the best.
- May 3, 2012 5:51 pm
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