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Tehaar

I really like the three first panels of the newest page. They're simple without a background which brings all the more attention to the flow of the discussion and their expressions. The expressions turned out very well! Foxtrail looks a bit genuinely happy, which confuses Softfur a bit, but then she sees through him and looks so knowing in the third panel. :D That's my interpretation anyway. I can almost hear their tones of voice in these pictures. But the two latter ones are a little difficult to follow, especially the dialogue int he last panel. What happened at least three times? Pranks? Skinning? The way you did the teasing dialogue is clever though, with the yawning wolf. I really like that, and the wolf turned out so nicely! Not too fond of the sweatdrops, but then, even I recognize what they mean even if I'm not fond of manga. That's all my comments for now, looking forward to more Hawk. ;)